Sometimes spouses have to live far away from each other. Maintaining a long distance relationship is sometimes difficult and straining. What do you think are the main reasons of long distance relationships? What can be done to help couples feel closer?
Nowadays living long distances among spouses is becoming more and more common than it used to be decades or centuries ago. It is considered by some people that supporting such relationships may be hardly, nervously and stressful. This essay will examine most causes of these associations between individuals and provide some possible solutions for feeling closer each other.
There are a lot of reasons why people have to live far from their spouses, but I would like to point out the main two of them: an excellent job and education opportunities. As for a career, well-paid works often foster individuals to make an unpopular decision such as a below-mentioned one. A salary, working conditions and others facilities, for example, a company's car or flat, are crucial causes. Moreover, sometimes it is impossible to get a good education in person's city or even their country, consequently, people tend to study far from their home. For example, my mother studied abroad for 5 years since the universities of overseas are more affordable and better than in Russia. My family could overcome such a hard period of time.
Modern technologies help people manage with such situations, not to feel alone and allow to be close to each other. Social networks, for example, Facebook or VK, and messengers such as Skype, Wechat and WhatsApp, provide individuals with this possibility enabling them to call and look at their favorites. What is more, a person should try to spend with their family the most essential events: birthdays, New Years and Christmas.
To sum up, a good job and well education may lead to the situation when spouses have to live far from, but contemporary technologies can help them feel closer.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, look, may, moreover, so, well, as for, for example, such as, to sum up, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 18.0 6.8 265% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 5.60731707317 321% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1437.0 965.302439024 149% => OK
No of words: 284.0 196.424390244 145% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05985915493 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 3.73543355544 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8587451139 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 106.607317073 168% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630281690141 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 283.868780488 158% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.502097435 43.030603864 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.538461538 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8461538462 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92307692308 5.23603664747 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207829414839 0.215688989381 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0639726807352 0.103423049105 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572736654478 0.0843802449381 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127695729711 0.15604864568 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0505248120183 0.0819641961636 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 40.7170731707 184% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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