The table below about spending on items in five countries v

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The table below about spending on items in five countries v

Submitted by Jass Mann on Fri, 11/30/2018 - 21:54

The tabular chat illustrates the details about the expenditure of people on various products in Ireland, italy ,spain, Sweden and turkey in 2002.

To begin with spending on food and drinks, in Ireland masses had spent highest amount of money about 28 percent. The italy and Sweden had about similar expensive with difference of 1 percent.

As for clothing ,italy had spending of nearly 9 percent which is maximum as compared to other countries. The turkey ,Ireland and Sweden had expenditure of approximately 6 percent each.

Further explicating expenses on education, turkey was at the top with 4 percent, second position holded by the Ireland with 3 percent . The spain was at the bottom with spending of 1 percent.

Overall, turkey had spent largest amount of affluence on food , italy was at in clothing expenses .But spain expenditure was least on education

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 4, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
The tabular chat illustrates the details abo...
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Line 1, column 112, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...le on various products in Ireland, italy ,spain, Sweden and turkey in 2002. To ...
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Line 3, column 66, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'spent the highest'.
Suggestion: spent the highest
... food and drinks, in Ireland masses had spent highest amount of money about 28 percent. The i...
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Line 5, column 16, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ference of 1 percent. As for clothing ,italy had spending of nearly 9 percent w...
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Line 5, column 116, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... compared to other countries. The turkey ,Ireland and Sweden had expenditure of ap...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Further,
...ure of approximately 6 percent each. Further explicating expenses on education, turk...
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Line 7, column 134, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ion holded by the Ireland with 3 percent . The spain was at the bottom with spendi...
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Line 9, column 21, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'spent the largest'.
Suggestion: spent the largest
...ng of 1 percent. Overall, turkey had spent largest amount of affluence on food , italy was...
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Line 9, column 26, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... 1 percent. Overall, turkey had spent largest amount of affluence on food , it...
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Line 9, column 63, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ent largest amount of affluence on food , italy was at in clothing expenses .But ...
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Line 9, column 99, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...food , italy was at in clothing expenses .But spain expenditure was least on educa...
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Line 9, column 101, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: But
...od , italy was at in clothing expenses .But spain expenditure was least on educatio...
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Line 9, column 123, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'was the least'.
Suggestion: was the least
...lothing expenses .But spain expenditure was least on education
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, as for, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 733.0 965.302439024 76% => OK
No of words: 142.0 196.424390244 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16197183099 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.45201032557 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71675151822 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 80.0 106.607317073 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56338028169 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 218.7 283.868780488 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.6936014836 43.030603864 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.625 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.75 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 5.23603664747 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 1.69756097561 766% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0750947965456 0.215688989381 35% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0458481668769 0.103423049105 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0390113557937 0.0843802449381 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.047801004137 0.15604864568 31% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0373629325616 0.0819641961636 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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