The table below give information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002

Essay topics:

The table below give information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002

A glance at the provided table reveals the percentage of consumer spending on various items in Europe including Ireland, Italy, Spain, Sweden, and Turkey in 2002.

It is obvious that most spending belonged to food, drinks, and tobacco; by contrast, the expenditure on leisure and education was minimum in out of 5 countries.

The rate of spending food, drinks, and tobacco in Turkey ranked first, at nearly one third, following by that in Ireland, at nearly 29%. Beside, the figure for leisure and education in Turkey was also higher than the one for Ireland in comparison between 4.35% and 2.21%. However, the clothing and footwear figures for both of Ireland and Turkey shared the compatibly with over 6 percent.

The percentage of Swedish expenditure on food, drinks, and tobacco was the smallest one, at 15.77%, however, in terms of education, its figure with 3.22% overtook that in Spain which was the smallest one, at 1.98%. Regarding clothing and footwear, the rate of consumer in Italy was the highest one, at exactly 9 percent, whereas the smallest one belonged to Sweden. Besides, all of the rates in Italy were higher than those in Spain except for food, drink, and tobacco.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, however, regarding, so, third, whereas, except for

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 996.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 199.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00502512563 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48046838643 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522613065327 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 298.8 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.482926829268 1035% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.04293994 43.030603864 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.5 112.824112599 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.875 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 5.23603664747 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0648619051399 0.215688989381 30% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0359687591768 0.103423049105 35% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0598786973105 0.0843802449381 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0638592965203 0.15604864568 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0728479180825 0.0819641961636 89% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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