The table provide information on the amount of time spend on various leisure activity from different age groups per year in Someland.
It can be seen from the table that both teenager and senior citizen spend more amount of time on watching TV/ videos at 1, 200 and 1, 100 hours respectively, while other age groups spend on only average 600 hours per year. In Socialising with 4 or less people, exactly 300 hours spend on this activity by 30 s age group, but others spend on this activity only a little amount of time.
However, in terms of socialising with 4 or more people, except teens and 20 year old groups relatively less time on this group activity. While the former spend on exactly 350 hours, the latter spend on this less than 50 hours in a typical year. Between 50 s and 60 s , they spend spare time on individual exercise at 50 hours and 75 hours correspondingly, whereas the other given age groups involved in this activity for more than 100 hours. At the same time, when 450 hours of time is used for group exercise/ sports activity by teens, both 60s and 70s plus group spend none of their time on it. Moving to cinema, the significant amount of time spend on watching movie by adolescent than others.
Overall, among all given activities, the teens spend huge amount of time on more activities than other people in a year.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1109.0 965.302439024 115% => OK
No of words: 243.0 196.424390244 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56378600823 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41316194604 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 106.607317073 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.506172839506 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 329.4 283.868780488 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 38.4200307839 43.030603864 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.222222222 112.824112599 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 22.9334400587 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173877140818 0.215688989381 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.09257019362 0.103423049105 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632141771972 0.0843802449381 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138166900118 0.15604864568 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0628464389357 0.0819641961636 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.2329268293 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 61.2550243902 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 11.4140731707 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.