The table below gives information about changes in modes of travel between 1985 and 2000.
The table represents concerning movements of people in British apply with travels mode in 1985 and 2000.
Overall, every mode of travel was changed and had enhancement except of bicycle and local bus mode was lowered at switched priod. Whereas all of mode in england was up.
In 1985, All modes the most higher than another mode in the same year with amount 4740, at the same time car keeping the second position after all modes with rate 3199, and the third position was other category that was 450 people use that mode. The data was provided statement that 3 categories become the most larger than several mode people used for travel in a country of europe. Whereas in wide range of types mode was increased in different year.
On the other hand, with the same mode of travel in england showed significant increased in 2000 whiches all modes, car and other categories was taked the same place with the biggest rate (6475, 4806 and 585 respectively). Furthermore, in category of bicycle and local bus was decreased, whilts in car was slightly under previous that 51 being 41, while local bus was constantly significant before it that was initial in 429 became 274.
- Some people believe that children should be made disciplined by making them obey rules and do what their parents and teachers want them to do Others however believe that those children who are controlled are not well prepared to tackle the challenges life 73
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement One should never judge a person by its external appearance Use specific details and reasons to support your answer 73
- Some people say it is OK to use animals for our benefit others say it is not good to expliot them Discuss both sides and give your opinion 73
- People should be allowed to obscure their identity online To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 78
- Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on every day matters is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 130, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...bus mode was lowered at switched priod. Whereas all of mode in england was up. In 1985...
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Line 3, column 24, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[1]
Message: Use only 'higher' (without 'most') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: higher
...england was up. In 1985, All modes the most higher than another mode in the same year with...
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Line 3, column 307, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[1]
Message: Use only 'larger' (without 'most') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: larger
... statement that 3 categories become the most larger than several mode people used for trave...
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Line 3, column 384, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...used for travel in a country of europe. Whereas in wide range of types mode was increas...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, second, third, whereas, while, after all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 964.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 203.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74876847291 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33309354445 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541871921182 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 295.2 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.2432158646 43.030603864 163% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.5 112.824112599 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.375 22.9334400587 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 5.23603664747 181% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176886413789 0.215688989381 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103888129617 0.103423049105 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0783620626904 0.0843802449381 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152198478818 0.15604864568 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0824741043739 0.0819641961636 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.2329268293 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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