The chart shows the average number of hours each day that Chinese American Turkish and Brazilian tourists spent doing leisure activities while on holiday in Greece in August 2019

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The chart shows the average number of hours each day that Chinese, American, Turkish and Brazilian tourists spent doing leisure activities while on holiday in Greece in August 2019.

The bar chart illustrates different amount of time everyday that inhabitants can waste to doing activities, however only holiday in greece in August 2019. Thr invent activities throught visiting places, reading books and go to the beach.
Overall, all visitors spent the most time for reading books while they spent the least time to visiting places. Chinese visitors waste the higher time for reading books than come to somewhere or look at the beach. In addition, supposed to brazilian tourist spent the longest in the beach.
On the other hand, both of America and Turkish visitors came to some places for stress out and the our of that categories is same around 3 ours in one day, but this contrast un another types. Turkish tourist spent the most activities in a beach for refreshing that indicates as 5 ours per day, meanwhile by 5 ours of America visitors prefer reading bookd for increase their knowladge.
Furthermore, average people come from china delight to reading several books to fill leisure, and the percentage was very significant that compares with another countries and categories, the amount show by 8 ours from 24 ours. Whereas Brazilian visitors loves beach more than another activities, they able to spent time until 6 ours in a day.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 52, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...rt illustrates different amount of time everyday that inhabitants can waste to doing act...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 96, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'our'?
Suggestion: the; our
... came to some places for stress out and the our of that categories is same around 3 our...
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, look, so, whereas, while, in addition, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 5.60731707317 268% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1050.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 211.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97630331754 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52234238187 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 106.607317073 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592417061611 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 319.5 283.868780488 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.1883474394 43.030603864 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.666666667 112.824112599 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4444444444 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 5.23603664747 185% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200379867437 0.215688989381 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0861639647824 0.103423049105 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051135945881 0.0843802449381 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117661624199 0.15604864568 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.032151659663 0.0819641961636 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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