The table below gives information about independent films released in the UK and Republic of Ireland by genre in 2012

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The table below gives information about independent films released in the UK and Republic of Ireland by genre in 2012.

The table shows the number and the percentage of independent film genres with income rates released in the UK and Republic of Ireland in 2012.

Overall, there is no correlation between the number of films and the income rates from ticket sales. Although dramas and documentaries were greater in their numbers, they made lower profits than biopic films, a movie genre which only one of its kind was available to the public.

In details, drama and documentary films each had the equal of 35 releases and thus, each made up 23.6% of all new productions. Followed by this were comedies that constituted 17% with 26 new films out of total 148 releases. Meanwhile, only a single biopic film was made public and yet, it gained 9.1% of the whole revenue.

Looking at the proportions of income, comedy and horror were the two highest grossing genres with the former having a box office record share of 45.4% and the latter took a record of 20.2% of domestic market. At the same time, the remaining film categories, namely, crime, action, documentary, thriller films all had lower than 5% of profit with romance being least popular comprising of only 0.8% in 2012.

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Average: 6.5 (16 votes)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, thus, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 965.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 199.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84924623116 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47107455152 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 106.607317073 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643216080402 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 288.9 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4262227284 43.030603864 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.625 112.824112599 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.875 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.125 5.23603664747 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218762739887 0.215688989381 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102420448344 0.103423049105 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.143776868925 0.0843802449381 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173125239617 0.15604864568 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.17730029005 0.0819641961636 216% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.2329268293 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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