The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002

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The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002

The given table illustrates us the percentage of the national consuption embezzlement of the five Europe countries in 2002 . these table include five countries. these are ireland , italy , spain , sweden and turkey .
If we look at the table , the first ireland state .In 2002 the state of ireland accounted for 28,91%of food , drinks, and tobacco 6,43% of clothing and footwear and 2,21%of leisure and education. The second country is italy . In 2002 italy calculated for 16,36% of food , drinks, tobacco , 9,00% of clothing and footwear , 3,20% of leisure and education. The third state spain. The spain deliberated for 18,80% of food , drinks , tobacco , for clothing and footwear 6,51%, for leisure and education 1,98% in 2002 . The fourth state sweden . The sweden accounted for food , drinks , tobacco 17,77% , for clothing and footwear 5,40% , for leisure and education 3,22% in 2002 . The next state is turkey . The turkey calculated for 32,14% of food , drinks , tobacco and for clothing and footwear 6,63% , 4,35% of leisure and education in 2002 .we know the percentages of national consuption expenditures of 5 countries in 2002.

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Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

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...ountries these are ireland italy spain sweden and turkey If we look...
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...rkey If we look at the table the first ireland state In 2002 the stat...
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...he state of ireland accounted for 2891of food drinks and tobacco 643 of clothing...
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...te of ireland accounted for 2891of food drinks and tobacco 643 of clothing and f...
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...nd education The second country is italy In 2002 italy calculated for 1636 of foo...
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...n 2002 italy calculated for 1636 of food drinks tobacco 900 of clothing and foot...
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...culated for 1636 of food drinks tobacco 900 of clothing and footwear 320 of lei...
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...ks tobacco 900 of clothing and footwear 320 of leisure and education The third s...
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...sure and education The third state spain The spain deliberated for 1880 of food ...
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...51 for leisure and education 198 in 2002 The fourth state sweden The sweden acco...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, second, third

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 874.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 179.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88268156425 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52146615673 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 66.0 106.607317073 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.368715083799 0.547539520022 67% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 253.8 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 8.94146341463 11% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 179.0 22.4926829268 796% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 43.030603864 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 874.0 112.824112599 775% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 179.0 22.9334400587 781% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 30.0 5.23603664747 573% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 27.0 1.69756097561 1591% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110916786229 0.215688989381 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110916786229 0.103423049105 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0843802449381 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136055237086 0.15604864568 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0700620923926 0.0819641961636 85% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 91.1 13.2329268293 688% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -93.29 61.2550243902 -152% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.51609756098 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 70.7 10.3012195122 686% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.21 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 14.19 8.06136585366 176% => OK
difficult_words: 19.0 40.7170731707 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 57.0 11.4329268293 499% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 73.6 10.9970731707 669% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 57.0 11.0658536585 515% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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