The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The table displays the percentage of national consumer expenditure on different categories in five countries in 2002.
Overall, it is clear that spending on food and beverage along with tobacco took the first place in all studied nations with big figure. In contrast, investment on entertainment and education was extremely low compared to these mentioned items. Meanwhile, clothing and footwear’s budget was average.
Looking at details, Turkey had the highest expenditure on both necessities and leisure and education with 32.14% and 4.35% respectively while demand for outfit was 6.63%, which is the second high number just after Italy. Ireland’s consumption of necessities was 28.91% whilst proportion of two remaining categories recorded as 6.43% for outfit and 2.21% for leisure and education.
Consumer spending of Italy, Spain and Sweden were almost similar on food, drinks and tobacco. However, clothing and footwear as well as leisure and education saw relatively big difference in figure when Italy dominated in both items with 9% for the former and 3.2 % for the latter. Despite consuming less than Sweden in entertainment and education sector, Spain defeated the Scandinavian country in expenditure of food and clothing.

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Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, second, well, while, in contrast, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 6.8 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.97073170732 277% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1053.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 189.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.57142857143 4.92477711251 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89054720735 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645502645503 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 315.9 283.868780488 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0573592728 43.030603864 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.0 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.77777777778 5.23603664747 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108156750245 0.215688989381 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0530351466609 0.103423049105 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0810902698576 0.0843802449381 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0968258745359 0.15604864568 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106763139842 0.0819641961636 130% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 61.2550243902 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.3012195122 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 11.4140731707 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.06136585366 119% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 40.7170731707 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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