The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

This table illustrates information about national consumers expenditure on various comodities in five countries, Ireland,Italy, Sweden, Spain,Turky in the year of 2002.

It is clearly be seen that the major amount of spending was on food or drinks or tobacco,and a small proportion of expenditure was on leisure/education .While, Turky consumes spant more, and less money were spant by Sweden' people.

To begin with, almost similer pettern was observed for Turky and Ireland people.Expenditure on food/drinks/tobaccos was highest Turky and Ireland, 28.91% and 32.14% respectively. But,Turky consumers did spend double on leisure/education than Ireland consumers[2.21%].

However, A least percent of expenditure was on leisure/education for Italy,Sweden,Spain consumes,less than 3%. But,food/drinks/tobaccos was famous amongst Spain[18.80%], Sweden[15.77%], Italy[16.36%]. Followed by expenditure on clothing and footwear, was 9% in Italy, was very less in Sweden, was in Spain was about 6.5% in 2002.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 51, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'consumers'' or 'consumer's'?
Suggestion: consumers'; consumer's
... illustrates information about national consumers expenditure on various comodities in fi...
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Line 1, column 121, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Italy
...us comodities in five countries, Ireland,Italy, Sweden, Spain,Turky in thi year of 200...
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Line 1, column 142, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Turky
... countries, Ireland,Italy, Sweden, Spain,Turky in thi year of 2002. It is clearly b...
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Line 3, column 85, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , and
...pending was on food or drinks or tobacco,and a small proportion of expenditure was o...
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Line 3, column 148, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... of expenditure was on leisure/education .While, Turky consumes spant more, and le...
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Line 3, column 150, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: While
...f expenditure was on leisure/education .While, Turky consumes spant more, and less mo...
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Line 5, column 72, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ettern was followed by Turky and Ireland .Expenditure on food/drinks/tobaccos was ...
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Line 5, column 74, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Expenditure
...tern was followed by Turky and Ireland .Expenditure on food/drinks/tobaccos was highest Tur...
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Line 5, column 140, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.../tobaccos was highest Turky and Ireland, 28.91% and 32.14% respectively. But,Turk...
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Line 5, column 177, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Turky
...nd, 28.91% and 32.14% respectively. But,Turky consumers did spend double on leisure/e...
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Line 7, column 10, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: The
...n Ireland consumers[2.21%]. However, A least percent of expenditure was on lei...
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Line 7, column 75, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Sweden
...iture was on leisure/education for Italy,Sweden,Spain consumes,less than 3%. But,food/d...
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Line 7, column 97, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , less
...ducation for Italy,Sweden,Spain consumes,less than 3%. But,food/drinks/tobaccos was f...
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Line 7, column 115, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , food
...,Sweden,Spain consumes,less than 3%. But,food/drinks/tobaccos was famous amongst Spai...
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Line 7, column 228, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...taly[16.36%]. Followed by expenditure on clothing and footwear, was 9% in Italy, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, while, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 854.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 138.0 196.424390244 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.1884057971 4.92477711251 126% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.42743929552 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.34606244423 2.65546596893 164% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.659420289855 0.547539520022 120% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.45097560976 124% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.310718649 43.030603864 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.0 112.824112599 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7142857143 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.85714285714 5.23603664747 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 1.69756097561 884% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.069477420784 0.215688989381 32% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0429057593293 0.103423049105 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544093557329 0.0843802449381 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0614782239229 0.15604864568 39% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.055143642709 0.0819641961636 67% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.2329268293 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 61.2550243902 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.3012195122 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.62 11.4140731707 163% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.06136585366 118% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.4329268293 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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