The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Submitted by tedy on Thu, 03/14/2019 - 06:05

The table provides information about the consumer spending on different items in five countries in 2002.

Overall,the majority of people in all nations gave expense on food,drinks and tabacco and the minority invested their money for leisure and education.

Firstly, the most dramatic constrast between the percent of the first category and the last one was for turkey accounted to aroud 32% for food and only 4.35% for educatoion. The second biggest distinction in theese is to Ireland.Moreover ,their expenditure for clothing and food wear is almost the same for Ireland is 6.43% and for and for turkey

Secondly,for the other tree states again t

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...ms in five countries in 2002. Overall,the majority of people in all nations gave ...
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Line 3, column 67, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , drinks
...ople in all nations gave expense on food,drinks and tabacco and the minority invested t...
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Line 5, column 221, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...cond biggest distinction in theese is to Ireland.Moreover ,their expenditure for ...
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Line 5, column 231, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Moreover
...st distinction in theese is to Ireland.Moreover ,their expenditure for clothing and foo...
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Line 5, column 239, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...nction in theese is to Ireland.Moreover ,their expenditure for clothing and food ...
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Line 5, column 348, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Ireland is 6.43% and for and for turkey Secondly,for the other tree states again...
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Line 7, column 9, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , for
...% and for and for turkey Secondly,for the other tree states again t
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, as for

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 33.7804878049 36% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 553.0 965.302439024 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 105.0 196.424390244 53% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26666666667 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.20108587294 3.73543355544 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87114031563 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 72.0 106.607317073 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.685714285714 0.547539520022 125% => OK
syllable_count: 165.6 283.868780488 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8631543403 43.030603864 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.25 112.824112599 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.25 22.9334400587 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.5 5.23603664747 258% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1032131378 0.215688989381 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126091021892 0.103423049105 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.218396056295 0.0843802449381 259% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126091021892 0.15604864568 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.218396056295 0.0819641961636 266% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.2329268293 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 61.2550243902 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 11.4140731707 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.06136585366 119% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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