The table below gives information on the salaries paid for secondary highschool teachers in 5 countries in 2009

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The table below gives information on the salaries paid for secondary/ highschool teachers in 5 countries in 2009

Submitted by khuekhue on Thu, 11/25/2021 - 06:42

The table compares the amount of income earned by middle/high school teachers in five different nations in 2009
Overall, it is apparent that teachers working in Luxembourg made the most money. As opposed in Australia, where teachers salary was reported to be the least among 5 countries, however, it took these teachers the shortest time to be paid maximum
In Luxembourg, teachers earned the most with 80000 as the minimum wage, 119000 after 15 years and 132000 as the maximum, which can just be reached after 30 years of working. In contrast, Australian teachers’ income had a decent start of 28000, however, teachers here only had to spend 9 years to earn 48000 which was the top salary
Denmark was the nation that demanded the least years spent by teachers to pay the highest income (54,000) with only 8 years. Although starting with 34000 which was 9000 less than Denmark, Japanese can earn much greater money after 15 years and 37 years with 65000 and 86000 respectively. Finally, Korean teachers were paid the most after 34 years with 62000 and no more than 50000 when working no longer than 15 years

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)
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IELTS Writing Task I - IELTS Academic

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, if, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 924.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 191.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83769633508 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35916021221 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591623036649 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 243.9 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 22.4926829268 169% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.7971721851 43.030603864 181% => OK
Chars per sentence: 184.8 112.824112599 164% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.2 22.9334400587 167% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 5.23603664747 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130902390095 0.215688989381 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0781800910145 0.103423049105 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0470090565216 0.0843802449381 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100516061459 0.15604864568 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0410736638983 0.0819641961636 50% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.5 13.2329268293 155% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.29 61.2550243902 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.3012195122 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 11.4329268293 149% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.9970731707 156% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 11.0658536585 154% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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