The table below shows the average monthly rainfall in two different cities Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The table below shows the average monthly rainfall in two different cities.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The presented table depicts how much rainfall there is in two different urban areas, Woodsville and Blacksboro in each of twelve months of a year.
Overall, July is the month which has the smallest rainfall in both two areas. The number almost decline gradually in seven first months of the year and climb again latterly.
According to the table, in Woodsville, initially, the rainfall in January is quite high, reaching 5 inches. However, the number is in a steady downtrend until July, stopping at 0.75 inches. In five next months, Woodsville has restoration in rainfall. The number increases gradually until peaking at 6 inches in November. In contrast, it diminishes slightly and stops at 5.5 inches.
As Woodsville, Blacksboro has also some similar features in rainfall. This area has a slight increase in two beginning months of the year, from 3 to 4 inches. Nevertheless, the number decreases sharply until July, reaching 0.01 inches. Then, it goes up again and peaks at 2.5 inches in December.

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Average: 8.7 (2 votes)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, nevertheless, so, then, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 841.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 166.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06626506024 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74294910232 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602409638554 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 240.3 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.8436749125 43.030603864 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 70.0833333333 112.824112599 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8333333333 22.9334400587 60% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.08333333333 5.23603664747 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116282029593 0.215688989381 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0418039222455 0.103423049105 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0550768484234 0.0843802449381 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0893506558058 0.15604864568 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0571375789295 0.0819641961636 70% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.2329268293 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.3012195122 58% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 11.53 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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