The table below illustrates thr number of people who visited the Ashdown museum before and after redevelopment of the museum and the charts shows the satisfaction rates of the people who went to the museum.
Overall, it can be seen that, the number of people who visited the museum increased after refurbishment. Prior to redevelopment, a larger number people expressed dissatisfaction with their visit.
To begin, in the year before renovation total visitor numbers stood at 74,000. Exactly half of those visitors were very dissatisfied and dissatisfied, with 10% and 40%, respectively. Only less than a fifth of the people were very satisfies before refurbishment and this figure doubled in the case of satisfied people(30%). 5% of the people did not responded to the survey before renovation, and this figure remained the same after refurbishment too.
With regards to the year after work was carried out, there was an extra 18000 visitors totalling 92000. The proportion of very satisfied and satisfied visitors rose to 35% and 40%, respectively. Also, surprisingly after redevelopment the percentage of dissatisfied and very dissatisfied people declined to 15% and 5%, respectively.
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 347, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'respond'
Suggestion: respond
...ied people30%. 5% of the people did not responded to the survey before renovation, and th...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.97073170732 277% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1009.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 186.0 196.424390244 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4247311828 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15961205543 2.65546596893 119% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548387096774 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 305.1 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.074349602 43.030603864 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.9 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.2 5.23603664747 23% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.353418497605 0.215688989381 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130330971801 0.103423049105 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0565466330371 0.0843802449381 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199406776404 0.15604864568 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0421524043024 0.0819641961636 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 11.4140731707 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 347, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'respond'
Suggestion: respond
...ied people30%. 5% of the people did not responded to the survey before renovation, and th...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.97073170732 277% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1009.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 186.0 196.424390244 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4247311828 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15961205543 2.65546596893 119% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548387096774 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 305.1 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.074349602 43.030603864 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.9 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.2 5.23603664747 23% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.353418497605 0.215688989381 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130330971801 0.103423049105 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0565466330371 0.0843802449381 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199406776404 0.15604864568 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0421524043024 0.0819641961636 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 11.4140731707 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.