The table below shows the proportion of different categories of families living in poverty in Australia in 1999.
The table illustrates the change in percentage of people who live in poverty in terms of different families categories in Australia in the year of 1999.
The percentage of people living as a sole parent who live in poverty was 21%,the highest proportion among other family types,somewhat 3 times more than the percentage of people living as a single aged person who live in poverty.This figure slightly decreased and reached 19% for the percentage of people living as a single ,no children,nearly 4 times more than the proportion of people living as a aged couple.But this figure remarkably went down for the proportion of people living as a couple with children,reaching 12%,nearly 3 time more than the proportion of people living aged couple who live in poverty,somewhat identical the percentage of all households.
In contrast,although the percentage of people living as a couple,no children and couple with children who live in poverty was nearly identical at 12%,7%,respectively,the number of people living as a couple with children was approxtimately 4 times more than the number of people living as a couple ,no children at excatly 933,000 people.Similarly although the percentage of people living as a sole parent who live in poverty was highest among other types of families,the number of people living as a couple with children was somewhat 4 times more than the number of people living as a sole parent at excatly 933,000 people.
Overall it is clear that the number of the people who live in poverty was nearly occured by the number of people living as a sole parent.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, similarly, so, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1331.0 965.302439024 138% => OK
No of words: 262.0 196.424390244 133% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08015267176 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 3.73543355544 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.30215323006 2.65546596893 124% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.332061068702 0.547539520022 61% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 421.2 283.868780488 148% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 65.0 22.4926829268 289% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 249.976998942 43.030603864 581% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 332.75 112.824112599 295% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 65.5 22.9334400587 286% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 8.75 5.23603664747 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 1.69756097561 1591% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227503067771 0.215688989381 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.212579074229 0.103423049105 206% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.144771297074 0.0843802449381 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212579074229 0.15604864568 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.144771297074 0.0819641961636 177% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 35.2 13.2329268293 266% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 5.5 61.2550243902 9% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 28.6 10.3012195122 278% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.07 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 11.4329268293 249% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 28.0 10.9970731707 255% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 11.0658536585 262% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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