More people are interested in cosmetic surgery in order to improve their appearance. Is it a positive or negative development?
It is true that huge amount of people keen on cosmetic surgery for having more beautiful semblance.As for me,ıt is a negative development for people health conditions and also unneccesary surgey has negative impact o their budget.In this essay ı will support my views with valid arguments and examles.
To begin with,cosmetic surgeries are a medical operations.For this reason,they have a lot of risks as other medical operations.So their consequences might be devastating.Thats why people might face a lot of unwanted conditions after their operations.Althought these types of surgeries request high medical knowledges,unfortunately,most of the doctors underestimate cosmetic surgeries. For example,my cousin had cosmetic surgery in 2015,since he wanted to change his nose structure.But unfortunately durıng his operations doctors made a simple mistake and they accidentally gave harm his nose cells.For this reason,after a surgey my cousın have lost his breath capability from his nose.Similarly most of the people have lost their health conditions because of the dangerous cosmetic surgery all over the world.Althought these types of surgeries request high medical knowledges,unfortunately,most of the doctors underestimate cosmetic surgeries.
In addition,cosmetic surgeries dont have any similarities like other indispensable medical operations in terms of budget,since health insurance companies dont support people for their special cosmetic operations.For this reason,people subsidize their operation bills as themself.This condition give harm their personal finances,because they might use their precious budgets for their other essential request such as education,food.But unfortunately,cosmetic surgeries obligate people to curb their main requests.For instance,my brother eas eager to have cosmetic surgery for his hair.But he didnt have enoıght budget for having such operation.Thats why unfortunately,he had left his university and he used his school budget for his surgery,since his health insurance didnt subsidize his operation.
In conclusıon,most of the people are eager to have cosmetic surgery all over the world.However,this situation might cause some of the unwanted healthy conclusıons such as breathing problems.And also these types operations significantly affect people social life in terms of their budgets,since people might easily leave their fundamental requests because of the lacking money.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, similarly, so, as for, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 46.0 24.0651302605 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2102.0 1615.20841683 130% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 6.21893491124 5.12529762239 121% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.09741844652 2.80592935109 146% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523668639053 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 654.3 506.74238477 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 67.0 20.2975951904 330% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 177.66260158 49.4020404114 360% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 420.4 106.682146367 394% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 67.6 20.7667163134 326% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 24.2 7.06120827912 343% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 56.0 5.01903807615 1116% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23968279072 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.162834614188 0.084324248473 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0416573919005 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1769513157 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0375156742665 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 41.7 13.0946893788 318% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -21.91 50.2224549098 -44% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 19.3 7.44779559118 259% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 33.0 11.3001002004 292% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 19.98 12.4159519038 161% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.02 8.58950901804 128% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 31.0 9.78957915832 317% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 28.8 10.1190380762 285% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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