The table below shows the sales made by a coffee shop in an office building on a typical weekday

Essay topics:

The table below shows the sales made by a coffee shop in an office building on a typical weekday

The table indicates variant cuisine was sell in coffee palace in two dissimilar section, there are food and drink an every workday.

Overall, this coffee shop has a demand meal corwd. The most profitable time during breakfast and dinner. Lunch, was the least gainful of usual day.

Specifically, 265 of the coffee at 07.30-10.30 rated as the most important feature, down to 110 of the tea. 5.30-8.30 was next with 200 of the coffee group and 175 of the tea group rating that first. After that, at 185 and 50 respectively comes 10.30-2.30. Last is 2.30-5.30, chosen by only 145 of the coffee and 35 of the tea product.

Turning to the food part, it is clear that 7.30-10.30 and 10.30-2.30 are also of one and thirdly most significant with 275 and 95 of the pastries whilst was 50 and 200 for sandwiches type. At 2.30-5.30 is rated number two by 150 pastries than sandiwiches was 40. Eventually, pastries calculated for 80 while the most negative trend differently sandwiches contributed of 110 in the end moments.

Votes
Average: 1.1 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 81, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'section' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'sections'.
Suggestion: sections
...sell in coffee palace in two dissimilar section, there are food and drink an every work...
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, third, thirdly, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 846.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 176.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80681818182 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69677550799 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636363636364 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 220.5 283.868780488 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.671724046 43.030603864 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.9090909091 112.824112599 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 22.9334400587 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.27272727273 5.23603664747 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0631573178357 0.215688989381 29% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.033162658209 0.103423049105 32% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045848436888 0.0843802449381 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0589328681625 0.15604864568 38% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0448764727057 0.0819641961636 55% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 61.2550243902 132% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.3012195122 58% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 11.0658536585 54% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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