The table below shows the sales at a small restaurant in a downtown business district.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

Essay topics:

The table below shows the sales at a small restaurant in a downtown business district.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The table describes the transactions of launch and dinner in a week made by a restaurant in a downtown business district.

Overall, The restaurant is popular for dinner than lunch every day in a week, the last day of a week have more guests for dinner. The lunch has similar sales except for weekends.

Firstly for lunch, the guests make about $2,400 of the transaction on Monday, the next day it upgrades its economic activities by $50. On Wednesday, businesses go up massively to $2,595 and it's the popular day for lunch than other days. The fluctuation in trades activities arises until Friday and make money $2,500, but at weekends the restaurants have minimal sales $1950, and $1,550 respectively.

Secondly, the economic activities on Monday are $3,623, and it is nearly 33% more than lunch. There are constant ups and downs in business activities until Thursday but Friday evening has a maximum visitor for dinner and increase their collection by $722. The end of the week reduces its purchase to $2,900 and $2,400 on Saturday and Sunday respectively.

Votes
Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 78, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...of launch and dinner in a week made by a restaurant in a downtown business distri...
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Line 5, column 41, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...Firstly for lunch, the guests make about ,400 of the transaction on Monday, the ne...
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...Wednesday, businesses go up massively to ,595 and its the popular day for lunch th...
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Line 5, column 186, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
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... businesses go up massively to ,595 and its the popular day for lunch than other da...
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...ities arises until Friday and make money ,500, but at weekends the restaurants hav...
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... restaurants have minimal sales 950, and ,550 respectively. Secondly, the econo...
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...y, the economic activities on Monday are ,623, and it is nearly 33% more than lunc...
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... end of the week reduces its purchase to ,900 and ,400 on Saturday and Sunday res...
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...ek reduces its purchase to ,900 and ,400 on Saturday and Sunday respectively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, second, secondly, except for

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 872.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 178.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89887640449 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69857139797 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561797752809 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.0050501186 43.030603864 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.8888888889 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7777777778 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.44444444444 5.23603664747 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110961953244 0.215688989381 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0541292869067 0.103423049105 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0634565763791 0.0843802449381 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0903473321731 0.15604864568 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0733928325716 0.0819641961636 90% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.2329268293 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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