The table shows the average length of video advertisements on the Internet and the average length of time viewers spend watching them Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisions where relevant

Essay topics:

The table shows the average length of video advertisements on the Internet and the average length of time viewers spend watching them.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.

The table depicts the average period of video advertisements and the average time watchers spent watching them.
Overall, 22,4 seconds was the average length of advertisement while the midpoint time viewed was 10,7 seconds.
For the period of advertisement, public service was the longest video with 45,8 seconds, followed by entertainment and automotive, 27,8 and 27,2 seconds respectively. Other retail was the fourth longest video with 21 seconds, less than highest one 24,8 seconds and only 0,5 seconds longer than financial services. The next type of advertisement was travel with 18 seconds, longer than home furnishings 0,7 seconds and pharmaceuticals 1,4 seconds. The two shortest video advertisements belonged to consumer electronics and clothing, 15,3 and 14,6 seconds respectively.
For the average time viewers spent watching, public service was the most attended video with 18,5 seconds. This was followed by financial services with 16,3 seconds, automotive with 14,7 seconds and travel with 13 seconds. Besides, entertainment and home furnishings were represented almost equally. The same pattern can be seen for pharmaceuticals and clothing. Meanwhile, other retail was the less viewed video, only 4,5 seconds.

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Average: 8.8 (7 votes)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 232, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'than the highest'.
Suggestion: than the highest
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, second, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 33.7804878049 41% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1046.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 183.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.71584699454 4.92477711251 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01328342088 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530054644809 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 297.0 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.5727691725 43.030603864 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0909090909 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6363636364 22.9334400587 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 5.23603664747 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143346008486 0.215688989381 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0743225645164 0.103423049105 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102863606117 0.0843802449381 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15692067693 0.15604864568 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121227424666 0.0819641961636 148% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 61.2550243902 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.6 11.4140731707 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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