The table shows the cost of water in 5 cities in Australia

Essay topics:

The table shows the cost of water in 5 cities in Australia

The table illustrates the information on the expense of water in 5 different cities, namely Adelaide, Brisbane, Melbourne, Perth and Sydney. Overall, the cost of water when used more than 125 KL is the highest in Perth, which is also where an average household must pay the most expensive bill. However, if less than 125KL of water is used, Sydney charges the highest amount of money.

According to the chart, regardless of how much water is used, a Sydney resident is charged $0.98 for each kiloliter and a Melbourne resident is charged $0.78. As for Adelaide and Perth, people living here pay the exact same water cost of 0.42 dollar for every kiloliter for up to 125KL, lower than that of Melbourne’s by $0.36.

It can also be seen that as the total amount of water used gets over 125kl, Perth residents are charged with the highest cost, which is $1.50 for every kiloliter, while those living in Adelaide are charged with the second-highest one, at $1.00 a kiloliter. On average, a house hold in Perth also pays the most expensive water bill that is $332, in comparison to the $253 and $310 bills which are paid by a house hold in Melbourne and Brisbane.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, second, so, while, as for

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 952.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 205.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64390243902 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4958454474 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556097560976 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 289.8 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.3381850145 43.030603864 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.0 112.824112599 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.2857142857 22.9334400587 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 5.23603664747 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144675330656 0.215688989381 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0764134760145 0.103423049105 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0291105313191 0.0843802449381 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106081886551 0.15604864568 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0369547306285 0.0819641961636 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.2329268293 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 10.3012195122 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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