The tables below show the amount of beer and fruit juice consumed per person in different countries

Essay topics:

The tables below show the amount of beer and fruit juice consumed per person in different countries.

The tabular data illustrates how many liters of beer and fruit juice are drank by people of 10 nations per year.

Overall, it can be manifested that beer is a more preferred drink than fruit juice where the highest consumption is in Ireland for the former one and Canada for the latter one.
First of all, on average beer is more popular and the Irish drink it the most per year (155 liters). Germany and Austria rank second and third with consumption of 119 liters and 106 liters respectively. The only two countries outside of Europe are Australia and the United States which are in seventh and eighth position (around 87 liters). Finland is the only country that consumes less than 80 liters of beer and due to it is in the last position.

However, the consumption of fruit juice is drastically lower than beer. The country which drinks the greatest quantity of juice is Canada and an average citizen drinks 52.6 liters each year which is, in fact, double than the tenth positioned Kiwis (24.8 liters). The United States comes second on the table with 42.8 liters. Notably, Germans, Austrians, and Swedes drink around 10 gallons (37 liters). Lastly, the figure for the UK and the Netherlands are roughly the same (just under 30 liters)

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, lastly, second, third, in fact, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1020.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 216.0 196.424390244 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72222222222 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3067080267 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560185185185 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 302.4 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.1671560839 43.030603864 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.7272727273 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6363636364 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.81818181818 5.23603664747 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191623413107 0.215688989381 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0762641171491 0.103423049105 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0649676526068 0.0843802449381 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126478159781 0.15604864568 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0309601279172 0.0819641961636 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.2329268293 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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