Talk about the importance of fresh water to life and offer your own solutions to preserve this very valuable natural resource.
There is no doubt that water covers up to 70 percent of the earth's surface, but fresh water accounts for only about 2 percent. Although this amount seems to be extremely small, people cannot live without it. My essay below will clarify how important fresh water is to human life as well as suggest some measures to preserve this precious resource.
To commence with, fresh water plays an indispensable part in daily activities. Human can not do anything without fresh water. Cooking needs water, taking shower needs water, doing gardening needs water, too. Besides, people's body must be always provided enough fresh water since water accounts for more than 70% body's weight. According to a recent survey, a famous American scientists showed that human being can survive for a week without food but they will die without water for no more than two days. Furthermore, fresh water is home of hundred types of shrimps, crabs and fish of farmers with the hope that they can escape from poverty, stabilize the economy and have a better life. In other words, water helps people balance their material life.
The role of fresh water is undeniable so people should work out solutions to preserve this resource. The government ought to support citizens to reuse water of possible so that water is able to be saved for other needy persons. Laws should be introduced to impede people from wasting and contaminating water. It will be better when individuals engage in protecting water campaigns to raise awareness about the importance of this valuable resource.
To sum up, fresh water is extremely necessary for daily life so people need to be responsible for preserving the valuable source.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, furthermore, if, so, well, no doubt, as well as, in other words, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 1.00243902439 1197% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 5.60731707317 250% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1414.0 965.302439024 146% => OK
No of words: 281.0 196.424390244 143% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03202846975 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 3.73543355544 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44728622419 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 106.607317073 158% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597864768683 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 283.868780488 153% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 8.94146341463 168% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.771467172 43.030603864 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.2666666667 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7333333333 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.86666666667 5.23603664747 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 3.70975609756 270% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296283213876 0.215688989381 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117368166458 0.103423049105 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0749646170268 0.0843802449381 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208656866844 0.15604864568 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0496177209059 0.0819641961636 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 40.7170731707 155% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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