Task 1 The chart below shows the annual pay thousands of US dollars for doctors and other workers in seven countries in 2004

Essay topics:

Task 1: The chart below shows the annual pay (thousands of US dollars) for doctors and other workers in seven countries in 2004.

A glance at the bar chart provided reveals a number of differences between doctors and other workers in terms of yearly payment in 7 distinct countries in 2004. An interesting piece of information highlighted by the figures is that American’s income was bigger than others, while the job earning the most money was the doctor.

Looking more specifically, doctors in the US earned 125 thousand dollars in 2004, which nearly doubled the money swiss and french doctors received, at both 65000, holding the next two positions. The fourth and fifth place of doctors’ income, meanwhile, were Germany and Czech, numbering slightly more than 60 thousand. To contrary, only Italian and Finnish doctors made less than 60 thousand in 2004, with somewhere vicinity of 59 and 45 thousand respectively.

Now considering payment other workers in more detail, also noteworthy is the fact that the highest other workers’ earnings, which belonged to American with more than 40 thousand, was still lower of 5 thousand than the lowest among doctors’ ones. With 40000 and 35000, meantime, swiss and french workers are paid in the second and third position, being followed by Finnish at more than 20 thousand. Conversely, three remnant countries are places where other workers get the least income, at nearly the figure of the US’s workers.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, conversely, if, look, second, so, still, third, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1120.0 965.302439024 116% => OK
No of words: 215.0 196.424390244 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20930232558 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64366954109 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 106.607317073 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613953488372 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 313.2 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7274353091 43.030603864 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.0 112.824112599 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.875 22.9334400587 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.375 5.23603664747 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270228777073 0.215688989381 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122842670902 0.103423049105 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599011063298 0.0843802449381 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184195067215 0.15604864568 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0154718855282 0.0819641961636 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.2329268293 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 11.4140731707 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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