Task 1: Line graph The line graph shows the percentage of New Zealand population from 1950 to 2050.
The given line graph indicates the proportions of the population in New Zealand between 1950 and 2050. Overall, it is clear that the figures for people from 25-37 and over 65 years old declined throughout the years, while the opposite was true for people from 0-14 and 38-45. Also, the percentage of people over 65 was the highest over the period years.
In 1950, 25% and 60% people aged 38 to 45 and over 65, sightly higher than those were 0 to 14 and 25 to 37 years old, at 6% and 20% respectively. Over the next 10 years, a slight increase to 25%, 30% and 64% were seen in the figures for people from 25-37, 38-45 and over 65. In contrast, people aged 0 to 14 remained unchanged until 1990 and grew gradually to 10% in 2000, on the contrary, followed by a slow drop to 10% the figure for people aged 25-37 in 2000. The year 1990 witnessed a surge to the peak of 70% and 48% in the percentages of people from 38-45 and over 65 before plummeting to 61% and 40% in 2000.
The proportion of people from 0-14 will see a significant rise to 20% in 2050. The figures for others will follow an opposite pattern, decreasing to 55%, 39% and 1% in the same year.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 9, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...highest over the period years. In 1950, 25% and 60% people aged 38 to 45 and ove...
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Line 3, column 79, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... see a significant rise to 20% in 2050. The figures for others will follow an oppos...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, while, in contrast, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 33.7804878049 139% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 946.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 221.0 196.424390244 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.28054298643 4.92477711251 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29850892119 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542986425339 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 247.5 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.1 1.45097560976 76% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.584801236 43.030603864 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.111111111 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5555555556 22.9334400587 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.44444444444 5.23603664747 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137430515994 0.215688989381 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0875256728875 0.103423049105 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.151496923897 0.0843802449381 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112587687952 0.15604864568 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.09659424902 0.0819641961636 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.2329268293 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 89.42 61.2550243902 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.84 11.4140731707 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.11 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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