Task 1 The table gives information about five types of vehicles registered in Australia in 2010 2012 and 2014

Essay topics:

Task 1: The table gives information about five types of vehicles registered in Australia in 2010, 2012 and 2014

The table compares five categories of transportation in Australia in three years 2010, 2012 and 2014. Overall, all five sorts of vehicles followed an upward trend. Additionally, the number of passenger vehicles were generally registered more than the other means of transport while the registration of motorcycles saw the biggest change.
It is clear from the table that in 2010, there were 11.8 million passenger vehicles registered, and this number was nearly five times higher than the figure of commercial vehicles, only at 2.3 millions. By contrast, the number of motorcycles and heavy trucks was significantly lower at only 540 thousand and 384 thousand. Meanwhile, the data of light trucks was lowest, at 106 thousand.
As you can see, the number of passenger vehicles grew dramatically to 13 million and maintains its first rank followed by commercial vehicles at 2.7 million in 2014. Otherwise, the figure of motorcycles continued to rise in the next two years and reached 13 million in 2014. In addition, the number of heavy trucks and light trucks witnessed sharp increases to 416 thousand and 131 thousand. During the period, the number of motorcycles changed most and. On the other hand, the number of heavy trucks saw the smallest rise at 8.3%.

Votes
Average: 8.6 (27 votes)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, while, in addition, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1057.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 206.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13106796117 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78942108976 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533980582524 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 299.7 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.2229594841 43.030603864 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0909090909 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7272727273 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.72727272727 5.23603664747 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167935453378 0.215688989381 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0707987785629 0.103423049105 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0965197967075 0.0843802449381 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136346475491 0.15604864568 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0991484351535 0.0819641961636 121% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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