Tell about your unforgetable memories

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Tell
Write narrative paragraph.Tell about your unforgetable that happen to ...
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Suggestion: asks
...uring your studying process if someone ask me what the most memorable story in hig...
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Suggestion: , I
...e most memorable story in high school is,I will tell them about noteworthy memory ...
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...nd I that just happened over 1 year ago.In my high school,grade 12 is divided into...
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...ppened over 1 year ago.In my high school,grade 12 is divided into good-class and weake...
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...ivided into good-class and weaker class.Luckily,my name is among the list of student wh...
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...into good-class and weaker class.Luckily,my name is among the list of student who h...
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...of student who has score on top group D.Athough that made me over the moon,the pressure...
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...oup D.Athough that made me over the moon,the pressure of study is obstruct me becaus...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'obstructed'.
Suggestion: obstructed
... over the moon,the pressure of study is obstruct me because each of members is too good ...
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Suggestion: But
...each of members is too good to catch up.But anyway,I set my mind at rest like &apos...
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...mbers is too good to catch up.But anyway,I set my mind at rest like 'I can do...
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...nd at rest like 'I can do it'.There is nothing happen until one day,my eng...
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... can do it'.There is nothing happen until one day,my english teacher come to...
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...;.There is nothing happen until one day,my english teacher come to me and said:&ap...
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...e and said:'that is not your place.You not deserve to sit in that class.Pride ...
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...ce.You not deserve to sit in that class.Pride goes before a fall.You should move to w...
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... in that class.Pride goes before a fall.You should move to weaker class!'When ...
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... should move to weaker class!'When i hear that told from a teacher i very ad...
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...ery admire. I can not belive in my hear.I seem to be about to cry.All the emotion...
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...ve in my hear.I seem to be about to cry.All the emotion that is being suppressed st...
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... is being suppressed stuck in my throat.Then,my face become to be crims with fury.I ...
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...being suppressed stuck in my throat.Then,my face become to be crims with fury.I thi...
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...en,my face become to be crims with fury.I think that if I am a teacher,I will mak...
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...with fury.I think that if I am a teacher,I will make inspiration to my student and...
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...get recommend them believe in themselves .Not thing is impossible! Next,I turned t...
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...t recommend them believe in themselves .Not thing is impossible! Next,I turned that...
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...hemselves .Not thing is impossible! Next,I turned that angry into my studying moti...
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... that angry into my studying motivation.I immerse myself in english exercises to ...
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...e a student who does not much experience,but that doesn't mean i'm a weak ...
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...t mean i'm a weak student.gradually ,i'm not mind what he say anymore an...
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...nglish score really make a fast process.So happyy.Through my story,I discover my s...
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...re really make a fast process.So happyy.Through my story,I discover my strength and tha...
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... fast process.So happyy.Through my story,I discover my strength and that give me a...
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...on about the power of believe in myself.Because of those reason,this story is really me...
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...elieve in myself.Because of those reason,this story is really meaningful for me.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, but, if, really, so, then, i think

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 3.15609756098 444% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 62.0 5.60731707317 1106% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1395.0 965.302439024 145% => OK
No of words: 281.0 196.424390244 143% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96441281139 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 3.73543355544 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1472195779 2.65546596893 119% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 106.607317073 163% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619217081851 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 283.868780488 151% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 1.53170731707 1175% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 2.0 8.94146341463 22% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 140.0 22.4926829268 622% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 28.0 43.030603864 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 697.5 112.824112599 618% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 140.5 22.9334400587 613% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 21.0 5.23603664747 401% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 36.0 1.69756097561 2121% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130869053519 0.215688989381 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105644763404 0.103423049105 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0734165902802 0.0843802449381 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192468738119 0.15604864568 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11867371215 0.0819641961636 145% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 72.2 13.2329268293 546% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -62.16 61.2550243902 -101% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.51609756098 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 56.7 10.3012195122 550% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.67 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 14.12 8.06136585366 175% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 40.7170731707 155% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 56.0 11.4329268293 490% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 58.0 10.9970731707 527% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.