Essay topics:
Tet holiday
People think they should forget their struggles, their work and focus on celebrating as festive as possible. Therefore, the factories, companies, and government must stop. The economic stagnation is widely identified by the consequences of this longest holiday of the year.
It is very strange that people were afraid of the dead but they are very excited when New Year's Day is coming. Day by day, year by year, they are coming up to the edge of the dead and they do not realize.
It makes people lazier because they believe Tet is a day of cleaning, house, buying new something, fix the broken furniture. Thus, they usually, delay until Tet to do those work.
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Essay Categories
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 13.0 33.7804878049 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 547.0 965.302439024 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 115.0 196.424390244 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75652173913 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.27472217062 3.73543355544 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51792815482 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 78.0 106.607317073 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.678260869565 0.547539520022 124% => OK
syllable_count: 167.4 283.868780488 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.2015347801 43.030603864 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 78.1428571429 112.824112599 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4285714286 22.9334400587 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123019199882 0.215688989381 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0553731870276 0.103423049105 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0649336920171 0.0843802449381 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0782103207042 0.15604864568 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0648063438845 0.0819641961636 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 40.7170731707 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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