There are many leisure activities on average day. Nowadays both children and adult enjoy playing computer games. What do you think about playing video games? Good or not good ? Why?
There are many leisure activities on average day. Nowadays, playing video games is one of the most popular leisure activities that both children and adult enjoy. In my opinion, it has more disadvantages than benefits. There are some reasons for my viewpoint.
Firstly, it affects our health. If we stare at screen everyday ,it can lead to eyesight problems. Also, sitting in front of the screen for too long will lead to backache and personal injury. Secondly, it makes us lazy and addicted. Especially for children, it will affect academic results. Because children addicted to play and forget to do homework, revise lessons. Finally, it wastes of our time. We will not have time to take part in interesting extracurricular activities such as sports, arts and ect. Moreover, it loses the childhood of children and children may have violent behaviour with fighting games.
In conclusion, playing video games everyday is not good. But it is up to you, the users need to decide to use it wisely for the best impact.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 55, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...fects our health. If we stare at screen everyday ,it can lead to eyesight problems. Also...
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Line 3, column 63, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...r health. If we stare at screen everyday ,it can lead to eyesight problems. Also, ...
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Line 5, column 36, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...s. In conclusion, playing video games everyday is not good. But it is up to you, the u...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 5.60731707317 321% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 847.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 171.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95321637427 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68072369688 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.678362573099 0.547539520022 124% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 1.53170731707 522% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 8.94146341463 168% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 22.4926829268 49% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.5853760971 43.030603864 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 56.4666666667 112.824112599 50% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.4 22.9334400587 50% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 7.6 5.23603664747 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.13902439024 527% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297016894743 0.215688989381 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0885717801492 0.103423049105 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.128813096855 0.0843802449381 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207698562203 0.15604864568 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0958436432992 0.0819641961636 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 13.2329268293 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.31 61.2550243902 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.25 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 11.4329268293 39% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.9970731707 58% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.