the three pie chart show the production, consumption and where the profit goes around the world.
the charts the illustrates production and consumption of coffee and profit goes in different part of the world namely Europe, America, Japan and so on. at first glance, clearly, most coffee production is in South Africa, however, most of them consume in Europe. also, it is noticeable that production takes most of the benefit of coffee profit.
obviously, coffee consumption among European and American people approximately is same with 41% and 39% respectively. moreover, Japanese people consume less coffee than the rest of the world with 8% and this amount for the rest of the world is 12%. Accordingly, the production of coffee has different distribution in the world. south Africa accounted for 44% of coffee production. afterward, Indonesia takes second place by 22%. then japan with 18% and finally, 15% of coffee production include in Vietnam. in third pie chart, it is shown that production take merely half of the coffee sales and after that retails takes 24% of the profit. distribution and experts take third and forth place in the mind of getting profit by 15% and 10% respectively.
all in all, despite the fact that most the coffee consumption is in Europe and all the production, is in Asia and Africa
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, finally, first, however, if, moreover, second, so, then, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 3.97073170732 327% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1021.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 204.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00490196078 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75712962059 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504901960784 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 304.2 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.4151193253 43.030603864 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.0833333333 112.824112599 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 22.9334400587 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 5.23603664747 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 1.69756097561 648% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215031455029 0.215688989381 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0854836467323 0.103423049105 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0819752640927 0.0843802449381 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14035708533 0.15604864568 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0773524208672 0.0819641961636 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.2329268293 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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