The three pie charts gives information about the differences in the yearly expenses of a school in United kingdom in three
different years.
Overall, In all the years major spending was on giving salary for teachers of the school . whereas, expenses for insurance of
the school fall into the lowest proportion.
Teachers salaries accounts for major portion in the year 1981.It was at 40 % and increased by 10% in 1991 to reach 50% and
go down to 45 % by 2001. At the same time salary given to other workers in the school falls into 28 % in 1981 and 22% and
15% respectively in 1991 and 2001. Money spend for resources like books was higher in the year 1981 (15%) and 1991(20%)
compared to 2001 (9%).
Similiarly, furniture and equipment expenditures amounts to 15% in 1981 and 5 % in 1991. But it was at its highest in 2001 at
23 %. Eventhough, the least spending was on insurance for school, in 2001 it was at its highest value of 8 % and was in
negligible prportions in 1981 and 1991.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...its highest value of 8 % and was in negligible prportions in 1981 and 1991.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 834.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 177.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71186440678 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58098964768 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54802259887 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 213.3 283.868780488 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.6727236117 43.030603864 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.6666666667 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.22222222222 5.23603664747 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 10.0 3.83414634146 261% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 1.69756097561 648% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185656352447 0.215688989381 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0865016022922 0.103423049105 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0396310654291 0.0843802449381 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0903745094525 0.15604864568 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0419917952832 0.0819641961636 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.2329268293 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 86.03 61.2550243902 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.3012195122 58% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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