Time 16-to-24-year-olds spent per week on sport and exercise by gender.
The bar chart shows the amount of time that 16-24 year old spent on sport and exercise per week. It is clear from the chart that young women are less active in their leisure time compared to young men.
There is a striking difference between the percentages of young men and women who prefer no to participate in sport in their free time. Almost half of young women devote no time at all to active leisure pursuits while this applies to only quarter of young men. However, there is similar difference between percentages of very active young people. Almost 1 in 5 men between the ages of 16 and 24 play sport for 7 or more hours a week. The figure for young women is only 5 percent.
A closer examination of the figure for young people who actually play sport reveals that the greatest proportion dedicate between 1 and 3 hours per week to these pasttimes. This is true for just over a fifth of both men and women.
The fact that only two fifths of young women spend an hour or more a week on sport, compared to approximately two thirds of young men, raises question about how fit young women are in comparison to young men.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, however, if, so, third, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 931.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 209.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.45454545455 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29272990681 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516746411483 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 279.0 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6671794844 43.030603864 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.1 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9 22.9334400587 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9 5.23603664747 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223682336163 0.215688989381 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121893734649 0.103423049105 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.197168052389 0.0843802449381 234% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172958231624 0.15604864568 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.155284939001 0.0819641961636 189% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 61.2550243902 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.53 11.4140731707 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.82 8.06136585366 85% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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