Topic The graphs indicate the source of complaints about the Bank of America and the amount of time it takes to have the complaints resolved Summarise the information by selecting and report in the main features and make comparisons where relevant Write a

The given two graphs describe the information related to complaints of bank of America. The pie graph illustrates the different sources of complaints, while the bar graph elucidates the average time taken between investigation and final action taken.

It is evident from the pie chart that most of the complaints are registered by public about the bank of America that is 63% also which is followed by government agencies with the 11 percent of complaints. However, the difference between the complaints that are filed by people of out of state and by insurance companies that is 2%. Moreover, bank employees and media are are registered same number of complaints that is 3% only and 2% complaints are filed by others.

Moving towards bar graph, it is vivid that most of cases investigated and solved in the year 2001 in almost 6 months rather than in 2000 the complaints are investigated and solved within five months approximately. Furthermore, in 2002 the time taken to investigate and resolve the complaints is decreased significantly that is 4 months which is almost same for next two years.

Overall, it can be started that maximum cases filed by public and least by others. However, average time period taken by investigation and solve the cases is around 5 months.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (7 votes)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 368, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: are
... 2%. Moreover, bank employees and media are are registered same number of complaints th...
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Line 5, column 44, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the cases') or simply say ''most cases''.
Suggestion: most of the cases; most cases
...ing towards bar graph, it is vivid that most of cases investigated and solved in the year 200...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 7.0 243% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.15609756098 317% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1069.0 965.302439024 111% => OK
No of words: 213.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01877934272 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87591547418 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521126760563 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 325.8 283.868780488 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1866850569 43.030603864 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.777777778 112.824112599 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 22.9334400587 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 5.23603664747 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.13902439024 527% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204238265852 0.215688989381 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0935145639913 0.103423049105 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.068742756041 0.0843802449381 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121676642818 0.15604864568 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0734239388301 0.0819641961636 90% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.2329268293 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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