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In thisset of materials ,the writer denied the existence of bees fossils 200millionyears ago, emphasizing his point of viewwith 3 main reasons ,whereas , the woman in the lecture assert the existence of such bees fossil during that time .First and foremost , the writer contends that there is no chaanceto preserve a species for all this time so its illogic for him ,howsoever thewoman in the lecture refutes that ,and says that there is a sticky liquidinside specific kinds of trees which allow to preserve the fossils all thistime ,but the trees producing this kind of chemical liquid is very rare .NEXT, the writer contends that ,there are no floweringflowers ,which is the main source of food for the bees ,moreover there is a mutual benefit relation between them ,incontrast, the woman in the lecture refutes that ,by saying that the bees werefed during that time on non flowering plants offering an example of pin trees afterwards,they developed and switched to flowers.Lastly, the writer wrap his arguments by emphasizing the pattern and structure of the fossil is quite differentthan the usual bees champers and might be related to other kinds of insects ,onthe other hand the woman insists that bees are capable to build different stylesof champers which lack spiral caps and distinctive chemical substances
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In thisset of materials ,the writer denied the existence of bees ...
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...nce of bees fossils 200millionyears ago, emphasizing his point of viewwith 3 main...
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...ing his point of viewwith 3 main reasons ,whereas , the woman in the lecture asse...
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...oint of viewwith 3 main reasons ,whereas , the woman in the lecture assert the ex...
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...sons ,whereas , the woman in the lecture assert the existence of such bees fossi...
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...he lecture assert the existence of such bees fossil during that time .First and ...
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...ce of such bees fossil during that time .First and foremost , the writer contends...
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... of such bees fossil during that time .First and foremost , the writer contends that...
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...for all this time so its illogic for him ,howsoever thewoman in the lecture refute...
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...ver thewoman in the lecture refutes that ,and says that there is a sticky liquidin...
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...ide specific kinds of trees which allow to preserve the fossils all thistime ,but the trees...
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...low to preserve the fossils all thistime ,but the trees producing this kind of che...
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...ery rare .NEXT, the writer contends that ,there are no floweringflowers ,which is ...
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... is the main source of food for the bees ,moreover there is a mutual benefit rela...
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...t, the woman in the lecture refutes that ,by saying that the bees werefed during t...
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...erefed during that time on non flowering plants offering an example of pin trees ...
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...ering an example of pin trees afterwards,they developed and switched to flowers.Lastl...
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...,they developed and switched to flowers.Lastly, the writer wrap his arguments by emph...
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...rs.Lastly, the writer wrap his arguments by emphasizing the pattern and structur...
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...is arguments by emphasizing the pattern and structure of the fossil is quite dif...
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...fossil is quite differentthan the usual bees champers and might be related to other ...
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...ght be related to other kinds of insects ,onthe other hand the woman insists that ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, lastly, moreover, so, whereas, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 3.15609756098 380% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 17.0 5.60731707317 303% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1119.0 965.302439024 116% => OK
No of words: 213.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25352112676 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94681171725 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 106.607317073 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605633802817 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 331.2 283.868780488 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 8.94146341463 11% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 213.0 22.4926829268 947% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 43.030603864 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1119.0 112.824112599 992% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 213.0 22.9334400587 929% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 54.0 5.23603664747 1031% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 27.0 1.69756097561 1591% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.215688989381 0% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.103423049105 0% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0843802449381 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.15604864568 0% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 109.8 13.2329268293 830% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -144.72 61.2550243902 -236% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.51609756098 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 86.4 10.3012195122 839% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.65 11.4140731707 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 18.72 8.06136585366 232% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 61.0 40.7170731707 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 54.0 11.4329268293 472% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 87.2 10.9970731707 793% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 87.0 11.0658536585 786% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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