Essay topics:
transport used during visit
The bar chart how people visiting New Zealand travel while they are in the country.
Overall, public transport is by far the most popular choice for holidaymakers. While the plane and the coach is the two types of transport used almost the same amount.
As can be seen from the chart, the highest percentage, around 70 percent of commuters using the car on holiday. Especially another type of transport is the plane, which over 30 percent, as the as the figure for people using coach.
The fourth popular mode of transport is the train, exactly 20 percent of travelers. The boat is by far the least popular choice, with only below 10 percent of international visitors.
Votes
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 109, Rule ID: THE_NN_AND_THE_NN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'are'?
Suggestion: are
...aymakers. While the plane and the coach is the two types of transport used almost ...
^^
Line 3, column 186, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'as the'.
Suggestion: as the
...rt is the plane, which over 30 percent, as the as the figure for people using coach. The fou...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 33.7804878049 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 556.0 965.302439024 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 116.0 196.424390244 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79310344828 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.28181803491 3.73543355544 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56004003759 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 76.0 106.607317073 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.655172413793 0.547539520022 120% => OK
syllable_count: 166.5 283.868780488 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 14.216977491 43.030603864 33% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 79.4285714286 112.824112599 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5714285714 22.9334400587 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.714285714286 5.23603664747 14% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234757421545 0.215688989381 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0997711957415 0.103423049105 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0582900566742 0.0843802449381 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1255772508 0.15604864568 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0593838659205 0.0819641961636 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.2329268293 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 40.7170731707 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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