The two figures below show the rate of criminal convictions among men and women of
different ages in the UK and the proportion of male and female prison inmates in the British
prison system
summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make
comparisons where relevant
A glance at the two figures reveals the rate of criminal convictions by ages and genders in the UK and the percentage of male and female prisoners in the British prison system.
The first picture gives information about the proportion of men and woman who are arrested in the UK. It indicates that male prisoners account for most of the total prisoners, 96 per cent. Meanwhile, female prisoners only account for 4%, 24 times smaller than the number of male prisoners.
The second picture shows us the proportion of convictions among men and women. At the age of 10, only 2% of men who are convicted and 0% of women. However, at the age of 20, there is a considerable growth of 14% in the number of convicted man while this figure of women is approximately 5%. Both two figures of man and women are followed by a sustained decline from the age of 20 to 60.
Overall, the number of male prisoners are always higher than female prisoners of all ages. It is also interesting to note that at the age of 10 and 60, there are no convictions among women.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, second, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 858.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 192.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.46875 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6232633144 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515625 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 279.0 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.673115264 43.030603864 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.8 112.824112599 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9 5.23603664747 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.447725375827 0.215688989381 208% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.174971675263 0.103423049105 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103842557242 0.0843802449381 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.281732619435 0.15604864568 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106051732521 0.0819641961636 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 11.4140731707 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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