The two figures below show the rate of criminal convictions among men and women of different ages in the UK and the proportion of male and female prison inmates in the British prison system.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main fea

The given two figures give information about the percentage breakdown of the British criminality. The first provides the changing of the criminal convictions between men and women of various ages. The second illustrates the gender ratio of prison inmates in the UK prison system.

It is obvious that teenagers are the highest criminal convictions rate in both sexs which reach the peak at the age of 20 and the men are far more likely to commit a crime than women. The convictions rate among 10-year-olds has by men and women was 20% and 0% those increased significantly to the peak in 20-year-olds by 16% in men and approximately decreased steadily after 20-year-olds and declined to 2% in 60-year-olds and the female conviction rate from about 5% to 0% in the same period.

It is vivid that men account for 96% of all prisoners which outnumber women 24 to 1 in the UK.

Votes
Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 198, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... between men and women of various ages. The second illustrates the gender ratio of ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 725.0 965.302439024 75% => OK
No of words: 152.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76973684211 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9186734621 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605263157895 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 217.8 283.868780488 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 81.0502244839 43.030603864 188% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.833333333 112.824112599 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3333333333 22.9334400587 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.23603664747 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319692956832 0.215688989381 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.155857919738 0.103423049105 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465874802668 0.0843802449381 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215513443228 0.15604864568 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0855364944387 0.0819641961636 104% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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