The two graphs below show the percentages of smokers and the consumption of alcohol in liters in selected countries for the period of 1960 2000 Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below

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The two graphs below show the percentages of smokers and the consumption of alcohol in liters in selected countries, for the period of 1960-2000.

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

The two line graphs illustrate the proportion of people who smoke and the amount of alcohol consumed in liters in the three different countries between 1960 and 2000.

It is clear that the percentage of smoking population in USA and alcohol consumption in Turkey each is the lowest throughout the span. Holland, however, is largely shown that both the smoking ratio and alcohol consumption are greater than other two countries.

In 1960, around 60% of people in Holland were smokers, compared to a little under 50% of Japanese people and about 40% of Americans. While Holland experienced a steep...

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