The given map illustrate the information about the island previously and after the build of some tourist facilities.
As can be from maps in that one big Island surrounded of sea, which is 100 metres long.in addition that Ireland was desolate land and there people had not visited as well as there were only more number of trees.
To begin with, after few years, Ireland is a developed as compared to before. Moreover, high ratio of people has been visiting in islands on number of accommodation has been increasing. Apart from the, one big restaurant has constructed for visitor as well one reception office has build in centre of island.then Island is a provide too many facility for tourist visitor it is a swimming area , boat and good footpath not only good footpath but also good vehicle track.
In overall it can be seen that comparing two maps slight change after this developed. what is more, now island is a provide good facility for tourist as compared to the past
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 197, Rule ID: THE_PUNCT[1]
Message: Did you forget something after 'the'?
...odation has been increasing. Apart from the, one big restaurant has constructed for ...
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Line 3, column 323, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...uild in centre of island.then Island is a provide too many facility for tourist visitor i...
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Line 3, column 337, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun facility seems to be countable; consider using: 'many facilities'.
Suggestion: many facilities
... of island.then Island is a provide too many facility for tourist visitor it is a swimming ar...
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Line 3, column 392, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...or tourist visitor it is a swimming area , boat and good footpath not only good fo...
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Line 4, column 86, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: What
...aps slight change after this developed. what is more, now island is a provide good f...
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Line 4, column 114, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... developed. what is more, now island is a provide good facility for tourist as compared t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, moreover, so, then, well, apart from, in addition, as well as, to begin with, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 808.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 170.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75294117647 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53233255788 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605882352941 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 257.4 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.6341124109 43.030603864 169% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.428571429 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2857142857 22.9334400587 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.4285714286 5.23603664747 276% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180797874931 0.215688989381 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0906823585558 0.103423049105 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.064560177087 0.0843802449381 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129120788821 0.15604864568 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0699859928317 0.0819641961636 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.