The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.
The map illustrates how an island is changed under the construction. Overall, it is clear that many tourist facilities were built on the island.
Starting with the first may, the island is about 250 meters and in the middle of it is an extremely large vacant land, with two groups of trees nearby. On the west of the island is a beach.
Turning now to the second map, a reception was constructed on the east of the samll parts of tress, surronded by vehicle track connecting a restaurant to the north and a pier to the south where people could go boating. There were two similar accommodation zones on the both sides of the reception, made up by several houses around, connected by footpath. One was built at the vacant space on the east of the reception and the other one was set up around the tress in the west of the island where even adding up a footpath for toursits to swim on the west of the beach.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, may, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 743.0 965.302439024 77% => OK
No of words: 169.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.39644970414 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45961747984 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568047337278 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 223.2 283.868780488 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.109062641 43.030603864 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.142857143 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1428571429 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.14285714286 5.23603664747 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175984209292 0.215688989381 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0895827857375 0.103423049105 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0494036545304 0.0843802449381 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135222691562 0.15604864568 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0587664547026 0.0819641961636 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.2329268293 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.5 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.54 11.4140731707 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.