The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The maps compare road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. It can be clearly seen that the road access changes in the two mentioned years are two roundabouts in front of Citi Hospital.

city hospital placed in hospital road and the building surrounded by Ring Road. In 2007 along the way hospital road is the bus stop. In 2010 that changes, bus stop centre in one place to the west hospital road. car park staff and public placed in the east of hospital road. there is four junction trough hospital road called city road.

The changes in road access to a city hospital can be seen in 2010. there are separated car park between public and staff, for public car park placed in the east of ring road and staff car park located in front of city hospital building near by roundabout. In 2010, bus station center in one place on the west of Hospital Road. along the Hospital Road there is two roundabouts, first exact in front of city hospital and another one is 4 junction.

In conclusion, the adding access road is two roundabout and bus station central in one place.

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Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: City
...dabouts in front of Citi Hospital. city hospital placed in hospital road and th...
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Line 5, column 212, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: Car
...in one place to the west hospital road. car park staff and public placed in the eas...
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Line 5, column 275, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: There
...ic placed in the east of hospital road. there is four junction trough hospital road c...
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Suggestion: There
...to a city hospital can be seen in 2010. there are separated car park between public a...
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Line 9, column 92, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'parks'?
Suggestion: parks
...e seen in 2010. there are separated car park between public and staff, for public ca...
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Line 9, column 237, Rule ID: NEAR_BY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nearby'?
Suggestion: nearby
...ated in front of city hospital building near by roundabout. In 2010, bus station center...
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Line 9, column 328, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Along
...one place on the west of Hospital Road. along the Hospital Road there is two roundabo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 892.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 197.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52791878173 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2580446741 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 79.0 106.607317073 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.401015228426 0.547539520022 73% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 257.4 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.973244831 43.030603864 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.3333333333 112.824112599 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4166666667 22.9334400587 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.66666666667 5.23603664747 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291568606909 0.215688989381 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.168335350914 0.103423049105 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0864462265642 0.0843802449381 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220048758018 0.15604864568 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0765801742796 0.0819641961636 93% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 13.2329268293 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 61.2550243902 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.3012195122 58% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 11.4140731707 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.19 8.06136585366 77% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 40.7170731707 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 11.0658536585 54% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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