The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010
The two pictures illustrate the road's transformation into a city hospital over three years from 2007 to 2010.
Looking at the two pictures, we can see that there was a significant change. The road access to the hospital in 2010 is more remarkably convenient than that of 2007.
In 2007, there were six bus stops on both sides of the hospital road. We can witness a small car park constructed for staff working here and for people who demanded. The city hospital was on the north side of the road. The Ring road surrounded it, and people can access it from the car park.
In 2010, perhaps because of the increase in population, two roundabouts were added to the crossroads. The second significant change was converting six bus stops to one bus station located on the hospital road's Westside. The 2007 car park was changed into two car park, one for staff and one for the public located on the East side of the Ring road.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 33, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'roads'' or 'road's'?
Suggestion: roads'; road's
The two pictures illustrate the roads transformation into a city hospital ove...
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Line 2, column 166, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...emarkably convenient than that of 2007. In 2007, there were six bus stops on bot...
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Line 4, column 151, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'bus' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'buses', 'busses'.
Suggestion: buses; busses
...d significant change was converting six bus stops to one bus station located on the...
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Line 4, column 263, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'park' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'parks'.
Suggestion: parks
... 2007 car park was changed into two car park, one for staff and one for the public l...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, second
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 757.0 965.302439024 78% => OK
No of words: 166.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56024096386 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48295831918 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524096385542 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 221.4 283.868780488 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.5479489089 43.030603864 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 75.7 112.824112599 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6 22.9334400587 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.6 5.23603664747 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338437444302 0.215688989381 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.160337327964 0.103423049105 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11544580544 0.0843802449381 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.249242476823 0.15604864568 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.070834774759 0.0819641961636 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 13.2329268293 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 61.2550243902 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.3012195122 58% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.87 11.4140731707 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.71 8.06136585366 83% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 40.7170731707 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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