Who can become a hero Heroes are people who do great things

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Who can become a hero? Heroes are people who do great things.

In any epoch, there are also heroes. Heroic can be a teenager or the aged and can be also usual people around us. Heroes are people who help and encourages other people to get over difficulties.

Heroes are people around us and there is no age or gender limit. A hero is a person who is always there to assist others and gives them the strength to overcome hardships in life. A hero can be who has given up their lives to other people can live. Heroic is someone who can help others in many different ways. To illustrate, a person helping an old lady or a little child cross the street is also a hero in their eyes.

Heroes are people who don't just do great things that they also do very simple things. In peacetime, there are also heroes they had sacrificed so much. For example, they left their dear family and even they also exchange their lives at any time, they are silent sacrifices without awards that they need only empathy, understanding and love from the citizen. "They are white shirt fighters".

Anyone can be also a hero. they are people courageous, sacrifice yourself and take care of others, pursuing better things.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...eroic is someone who can help others in many different ways. To illustrate, a person helping ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...in their eyes. Heroes are people who dont just do great things that they also do ...
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Line 7, column 28, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...rs'. Anyone can be also a hero. they are people courageous, sacrifice yourse...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, for example

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 7.0 243% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 18.0 5.60731707317 321% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 949.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 205.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62926829268 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39380521155 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565853658537 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 306.0 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.3782770691 43.030603864 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.7857142857 112.824112599 60% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6428571429 22.9334400587 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.78571428571 5.23603664747 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 3.70975609756 350% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.406040697452 0.215688989381 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.158321028937 0.103423049105 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.136749554094 0.0843802449381 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.247228442242 0.15604864568 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0802345138932 0.0819641961636 98% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 13.2329268293 58% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 61.2550243902 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.98 11.4140731707 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.95 8.06136585366 86% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.4329268293 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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