Write a letter to a friend to ask for his/her help to collect money for a charity organization. The letter needs to cover the following details.
- why do you want to collect money for the charity organization.
- Ask your friend to help
- explain in detail how your friend can help.
Dear Kinjal,
I wish you are pink at your health. I am writing this letter in order to seek your support in collecting a fund of Rupees One lac for the old age home where I am giving my service as a volunteer since last two years.
Actually, "sandhya-kutir" old age home has 120 senior citizens under its shelter. Here, They reside and perform many functions that may not only interest them but help to utilize their free time in a productive manner. These functions include painting, crafting, gardening etc. Now, the trust who is running this facility wants to set up a small workshop for these people
where they can do a production of different types of artifacts and earn their livelihood to be independent. Hence, we are in need of some fund mentioned above to buy instruments and machines for the production.
As I understand, You are working as an HR manager in one of the leading retail organization where you might have some provision of donation under corporate social responsibility budget for this kind of charity. We do not want the fund totally in charity as we want these people to be independent, we would be happy to make a beautiful artifact for the cabin of CMD and for a foyer of the company at an entrance, in exchange for the donated amount. I would request you to take our proposal forward to your management as well as to the employees so that whoever will be interested in contributing can come forward and contact us.
I hope you will find our proposal in a service of the humanity and you will extend your helping hand to realize this herculean task of raising fund for needy people.
Warm regards,
yours only
XYZ
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 206, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a productive manner" with adverb for "productive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...hem but help to utilize their free time in a productive manner. These functions include painting, cra...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, hence, if, may, so, well, as to, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 1.00243902439 998% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 5.60731707317 713% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1384.0 965.302439024 143% => OK
No of words: 294.0 196.424390244 150% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7074829932 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 3.73543355544 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87177174909 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 106.607317073 165% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598639455782 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 283.868780488 153% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 1.53170731707 718% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 1.0 0.114634146341 872% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.4089698232 43.030603864 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.333333333 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 22.9334400587 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.58333333333 5.23603664747 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70975609756 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210748346837 0.215688989381 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.065062096463 0.103423049105 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0488202454681 0.0843802449381 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108803895584 0.15604864568 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.037049890211 0.0819641961636 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.2329268293 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 40.7170731707 165% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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