The diagram illustrates the processes of how the Australian Bureau of Meteorology collect information related to weather so as to produce reliable forecasts.
Based on the diagram, it can be seen that there are three ways to get the weather information which include the information from satellite, radar, and drafting buoy. These sources enable the Australian Bureau of Meteorology to analyse and forecast the weather. In the step of analysis and forecasting, the observation is made based on the satellite photo, radar screen, and synoptic chart. The personnel of the bureaucracy will have to predict the temperature and the type of weather by observing whether there are many clouds in the sky or it is going to be a sunny day. After that, the detailed analysis and forecast of the weather will be written using a computer and the report of the forecast is then ready to be broadcast in multimedia such as television newsreader, radio and recorded announcement.
To sum up, there are three main steps in producing a reliable weather forecast. It is important that weather forecast be as accurate as possible so that people have some preparations such as bringing umbrella if it is predicted to be rainy day and so on.
The provided diagram
The provided diagram illustrates how the data received from three different sources are used by the Australian Bureau of Meteorology in order to generate reliable weather data. The diagram also includes the communication mediums used by them for broadcasting.
According to the diagram, the Meteorology department uses three different information sources namely, satellite, radar, and drifting buoy. Next, the information received from these sources is analyzed in order to forecast future weather conditions. This step consists of three main parallel processes. The first process involves the analysis of the satellite image received from the satellite. Next includes the analysis of radar screen data which are collected from the radar station. The final process involves the analysis of the synoptic chart generated from data collected from all the sources. After the analysis and forecasting step, the forecasted weather information is preparing for the broadcasting at the computer workstation.
Finally, the forecasted weather information is broadcast to the public through TV, radio and as recorded announcements.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 123, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
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Discourse Markers used:
['if', 'so', 'then', 'as to', 'such as', 'to sum up']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.243243243243 0.268076937826 91% => OK
Verbs: 0.189189189189 0.116061578633 163% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0720720720721 0.0759168565197 95% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0225225225225 0.0366838410393 61% => OK
Pronouns: 0.018018018018 0.0131127313244 137% => OK
Prepositions: 0.126126126126 0.155750635184 81% => OK
Participles: 0.0630630630631 0.0379272487307 166% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.907022411 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0405405405405 0.0210936926555 192% => Less infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0045045045045 0.00175180941692 257% => Less particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.117117117117 0.0948980150116 123% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0135135135135 0.00437022459523 309% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00900900900901 0.00967000014798 93% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1232.0 1161.00487805 106% => OK
No of words: 205.0 196.9 104% => OK
Chars per words: 6.00975609756 5.90752243213 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.73763899035 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.356097560976 0.337110787985 106% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.312195121951 0.247514529752 126% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.229268292683 0.171178102325 134% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.136585365854 0.112407865282 122% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.907022411 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551219512195 0.546246751206 101% => OK
Word variations: 50.185621303 49.3433353143 102% => OK
How many sentences: 8.0 8.93414634146 90% => OK
Sentence length: 25.625 23.0094962315 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9106531078 42.9750493124 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.0 135.714022679 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.625 23.0094962315 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.75 0.689975730869 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.84146341463 78% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.48048780488 68% => OK
Readability: 56.8445121951 47.7609492067 119% => OK
Elegance: 1.88235294118 2.94281807926 64% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.493459635544 0.418131533498 118% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.198243751862 0.181151798455 109% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0955275059945 0.0850326197045 112% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.723805652238 0.706616315825 102% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.159988740619 0.157042692854 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.298334660922 0.228904883108 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.152734213042 0.108899403657 140% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.354067641587 0.367819155151 96% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.11365147411 0.0812612215331 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.374161275378 0.316326947829 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.20817168942 0.0921553760075 226% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70731707317 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.08536585366 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 2.0 3.16585365854 63% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 3.02926829268 99% => OK
Total topic words: 5.0 7.1512195122 70% => OK
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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