WRITING TASK 1 LINE GRAPH: AVERAGE CO2 EMISSIONS PER PERSON
The line graph depicts the information about the intermediate carbon dioxide emissions per person in four different countries United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal from 1967 to 2007.
It is clear from the graph that there was a similar downward trend in United Kingdom and Sweden whereas in Italy and Portugal experienced a contrasting movement over the given period.
It could be easily observed seen from the graph that the average carbon dioxide emissions per person in United Kingdom and Sweden were higher around 10.5 metric tones and 8.5 metric tones in 1967. In 1987, the number of carbon dioxide exhaust gas in the UK stood at 10 metric tones, compared to 8 metric tones per person in Sweden. In the next 20 years, the UK witnessed a mild decrease in the emissions around 8.5 metric tones while the figure for emissions in Sweden decrease dramatically to 5.5 metric tones in 2007.
It can be seen that in Italy and Portugal were noticeably lower at 4.2 metric tones and 1 metric tones in 1967. From 1967 to 1987, the proportion for emissions in Italy increased remarkably by 6.5 metric tones, then continued its upward trend more substantially to 7.6 metric tones in 2007. With the emissions in Portugal there was a significant increase of 3.5 metric tones between 1967 and 1987, which was followed by a slight a rise to 4.5 in 2007.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1125.0 965.302439024 117% => OK
No of words: 233.0 196.424390244 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82832618026 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4786513176 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.472103004292 0.547539520022 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 332.1 283.868780488 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 28.0446073248 43.030603864 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.625 112.824112599 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.125 22.9334400587 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.23603664747 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156184584595 0.215688989381 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0853124541299 0.103423049105 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0747994477335 0.0843802449381 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113410720456 0.15604864568 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0799292424848 0.0819641961636 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.2329268293 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 10.3012195122 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.33 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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