WRITING TASK 1
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
Percentage of UK people who consumed daily recommended amount of fruit and vegetables in 2002, 2006 and 2010.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.
The bar chart below illustrates the percentage of UK people having suitable fruit and vegetables consumption everyday in 3 different years: 2002; 2006 and 2010.
Overall, it is apparent that the percentage of women consuming fruit and vegetables was always the highest percentage over the period of 3 years. Also, the biggest different was in the percentage of women and their offspring in 2002.
It can be seen that the proportion of men engorging suggested fruit and vegetables rose slightly over the period. In particular, the percentage of men consuming fruit and vegetables in 2002 and 2010 were 22% and 24%, respectively. Besides, the year 2006 witnessed the highest percentage in the percentage of men using fruit and vegetables, which stood at 26%.
The rate of women consuming fruit and vegetables fluctuated while the percentage of children for that experienced a considerable rise of 5% over the period. Furthermore, the figure for women was significantly higher than the figure for children in 3 different years. On the other hand, in 2006, the percentage of women having fruit and vegetables consumption accounted for 32%, which was the highest percentage, while the opposite was true for that of children, stood at 11%, which was the lowest percentage over the period.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, furthermore, if, so, while, in particular, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1080.0 965.302439024 112% => OK
No of words: 208.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19230769231 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93607938077 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.451923076923 0.547539520022 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 317.7 283.868780488 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6375570586 43.030603864 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.0 112.824112599 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1111111111 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 5.23603664747 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180662073976 0.215688989381 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0996946293875 0.103423049105 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600793933271 0.0843802449381 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141240905405 0.15604864568 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0456477818218 0.0819641961636 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.