You are planning to take a vacation.
Write a letter to a friend. In your letter
•describe the vacation spot you have chosen
•explain how you plan to spend your time there
•invite your friend to join you on your vacation
Begin your letter as follows
Dear John,
I hope this letter finds you in the pink of health. It has been a long time since I went on holiday, therefore, I decided to plan for an abroad vacation which includes two countries. We will be departing from Delhi airport on 30th June and the first place we will be visiting is Dubai, and then we'll be reaching your home country Singapore, and will stay there for three odd days.
In fact, why not you guys join us there? By the way, we are planning to visit the biggest museum available there as well as one of the finest collections of animals in the world. Furthermore, I want to visit the well-known Merlion statue which spouts water from its mouth.
However, I lack exact information about many things as I never visited earlier, can you help me with that? Firstly, I am not sure which hotels would be best for family accommodation. Secondly, what are the best places children can enjoy? I would be grateful if you can recommend them which will help me to plan our schedule accordingly.
Looking forward to hearing you!
Yours Lovingly,
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, second, secondly, then, therefore, well, in fact, as well as, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 1.00243902439 898% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 5.60731707317 482% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 880.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 190.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63157894737 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47446796095 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 106.607317073 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.7 0.547539520022 128% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 1.53170731707 653% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.2698337677 43.030603864 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.0 112.824112599 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2727272727 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0909090909 5.23603664747 231% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 3.70975609756 270% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205063050859 0.215688989381 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0792143620849 0.103423049105 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0762204404651 0.0843802449381 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107688433094 0.15604864568 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0365192270005 0.0819641961636 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.2329268293 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 11.4140731707 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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