Dear sir/madam,
I am writing this letter to express my gratitude for the plan of building shopping centre in our locality.
Last Saturday, I was wondered when I found a piece of news regarding the construction of mall in the center of town. There are lack of shops of branded clothes, kitchenware and electrical appliances which we need in day to day life. With the establishment of this centre , there is a sign of relief to most of the local dwellers who have to search plenty of shops for such things.
Moreover, I would like to ask about entertainment section, is there any plan to build theatre inside it?. Because, the old cinema hall is so far away from our area and not equipped with modern facilities. If movie theatre is also build, then it will be an exciting news for the local people, who are fond of watching movies on big screen.
I am looking forward for your response, because there is a huge demand for such a spot in the city.
Yours faithfully
Kiran
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 271, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...e. With the establishment of this centre , there is a sign of relief to most of th...
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Line 7, column 231, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'builded', 'built'.
Suggestion: builded; built
...rn facilities. If movie theatre is also build, then it will be an exciting news for t...
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Line 7, column 254, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'exciting news'.
Suggestion: exciting news
... theatre is also build, then it will be an exciting news for the local people, who are fond of w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, moreover, regarding, so, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 5.60731707317 268% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 811.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 176.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60795454545 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57753462924 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.676136363636 0.547539520022 123% => OK
syllable_count: 243.9 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.2491529642 43.030603864 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.1111111111 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5555555556 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 5.23603664747 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179563043527 0.215688989381 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0672711898173 0.103423049105 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0408947397377 0.0843802449381 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0995616704086 0.15604864568 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0416947225383 0.0819641961636 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 11.4140731707 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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