Advertisements are becoming more and more common in everyday life. Is it a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, with advancement in technology, promoting products are gaining popularity in day to day life. Although, advertisements are additional cost added to the products price but it is good way to attract the customers. In this essay, I will elucidate some positive development of advertising.

First and the foremost, advertisements plays major role in promoting the different kind of products and reach to most of the customers while doing this. It can be done via various modes such as pamphlets, newspapers, commercial breaks and social media. For example, the goods launched in America like iphone X immediately got popularity and numerous people try to get it, who ae keen interested in using those technologies, when it's ads display on internet and news. Hence, it is an easy way to exhibit the different sort of things which was not common few decades age.
In addition to this, most of the people are employed only for displaying the things in front of million of viewers on television, internet and so on. Some individuals are brand ambassadors for particular brands who attract the people by explaining the benefits of using the products. There are plethora of industries which are manufacturing same things and facing competition in the market. So, in that way advertisements becomes essential to sell there goods among population. Beside this, they are creating innovative ideas to drawn attraction of the population to buy their products even if they donot require it.
In a nutshell, nowadays advertisement becomes an internal part of society as people get to know about various type of things manufactured at different places and they can choose the things according to their budgets and need along with job opportunities

Votes
Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, so, while, as to, for example, in addition, kind of, sort of, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1465.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19503546099 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00933485555 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627659574468 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.0298785852 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.692307692 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6923076923 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07692307692 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0914409563246 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0341293172038 0.084324248473 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0388729312357 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0591281417121 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0320808751129 0.056905535591 56% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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