Dear Amit,
I want to say thank you for the hospitality you do on vacations. It was a fun and, a memorable trip. Now, I feel that it was a right decision to spend our holidays together at your place.
I'm writing to say that I forget my wallet at your home because of the hurry to catch the train. It will be in your TV room, where I took credit card from it to book my tickets. It is very precious to me as it is gifted by my uncle.
It'd be great if you can find it and parcel to me at my hostal address. But, make sure to cross check address before writing it down, as some of the important documents are in it.
Please get back me as soon as possible.
See you soon
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...our holidays together at your place. Im writing to say that I forget my wallet ...
^^
Line 7, column 137, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...heck address before writing it down, as some of the important documents are in it. Pleas...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 5.60731707317 535% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 549.0 965.302439024 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 138.0 196.424390244 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 3.97826086957 4.92477711251 81% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.42743929552 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.13615764919 2.65546596893 80% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.547539520022 122% => OK
syllable_count: 167.4 283.868780488 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.3309018565 43.030603864 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 54.9 112.824112599 49% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.8 22.9334400587 60% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.9 5.23603664747 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231616495648 0.215688989381 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.08368445537 0.103423049105 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.083296890551 0.0843802449381 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103809115412 0.15604864568 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0784612699428 0.0819641961636 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.2 13.2329268293 32% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 92.12 61.2550243902 150% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 3.6 10.3012195122 35% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 5.21 11.4140731707 46% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.23 8.06136585366 77% => OK
difficult_words: 17.0 40.7170731707 42% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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